Concrete poetry is the use of words and their physical formation to convey meaning. This may done with color, the shape of the letters, and/or the arrangement of words.
Directions: Graphically create a scene using only words that relate in some way to your object. From a distance this will look like a picture, but up close it will consist only of words and phrases. No extra lines or shapes should be used. A light pencil might be drawn first as a guide. Use color, shapes, and sizes that will enhance the meaning of the words.
Here's my poem:
ReplyDeleteA perfectly innoscent object
Shimmering from a distance
Glowing in the light
Hasn't done a thing wrong
The shape is curvy
The texture is smooth
The color is outrageous, but not too surprising
It gives you a soothing feeling
This is what this object is, plus more
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ReplyDeleteHere's my poem:
A perfectly innoscent object
Shimmering from a distance
Glowing in the light
Hasn't done anything wrong
The shape is curvy
The texture is smooth
The color is outrageous, but not too
surprising
It gives you a soothing feeling
This object is all that plus more
My poems about the sun and shaped like it. Its kind of long.
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ReplyDeleteThe Sun
The Sun is a big ball of fire,
The Sun is a light
my light,
your light,
our light,
a light
The sun is big, beautiful, glowing ball,
my big, beautiful, glowing ball,
your big beautiful, glowing ball,
our big beautiful, glowing ball,
a big, beautiful, glowing ball,
The sun is a big ball of fire
On a hot summer day, I lay in a lawn chair. My skin soaked up the hot, dreadfulness of the sun, providing beads of sweat on me. My mind was empty of all thoughts. I held my popsicle in my sweaty hand. Popsicle droplets trickled down my fingers, constantly causing my hand to be sticky. I got up, hoping something inter- esting would happen. Nothing moved. The sun beat down on my popsicle. Soon it started to melt melt melt away.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is supposed to shaped like a popsicle, and the 'melt melt melt away' part goes down as the stick. It is really cool. Hope you enjoyed it. ;)
Rhyming
ReplyDeletedo I really seriously have to rhyme,
I know it's hard but I will try,
but this is really hard!
did you say every line?!
this is to difficult,
I'm going now...
good bye!
This poem is suppoed to be shaped like a quetion mark and it shows that anyone can rhyme...
even me!
it was carbed so butifull,icouden't beleave i fond it,we took a picher of it,then with me in the shot,it was the most exsitin time of my life,to see somthing so butiful.
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