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Wednesday, March 31, 2010

10 Days of Poetry

Sense Poem:
Think of a place that is special. Form an image in your mind of that place of it you can go there. then complete the following statements.

I see ___________________ I see the sage-covered desert
I smell __________________ I smell the freshness of morning
I hear __________________ I hear the scream of the hawk
I feel ___________________ I feel the caress of a breeze
I taste __________________ I taste the dew on the wind
I think __________________ I think the new day is born

After you have written out the sentences, remove the pronouns, verbs, and articles as you need to:

Example:
Sage-covered grass
freshness of morning
scream of the hawk
caress of a breeze
dew of the wind
new day born

9 comments:

  1. I Love Candy So Thats Why I Wrote This Poem!

    CANDY LAND

    Cotton Cany Grass
    Sweet Bubble Gum In the Air
    Chocolate As It Falls Down The Chocolate Fall
    Happyness Bundeled Inside Me
    I Tast The Sourness Of War Heads
    I Thought To My Self How Butifull

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  2. sage-coverd the smok
    freshess a summer afternoon
    the scratches fo my dog's feet
    it is a grate summer day i can hear the wind say
    the green grass on the grownd
    the god is waching us all.

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  3. Trees swaying in the wind
    crisp, fresh, afternoon air
    birds chirping their lovely songs happily
    leaves tickling my bare feet
    creamy chocolate treats
    can't this happen every day?

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  4. #15k-
    Drinking sweet nectar,
    A golden, yellow,flower,
    Late spring afternoon
    -Butterfly

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  5. #15k-
    Green grass newly cut,
    Dog barks, woof,
    Winds stroke,
    Dryness of air,
    BBQ smells,
    What a beautiful day!

    -I went outside my back yard and I listed in my WNB what I had heard, say, felt, tasted, and thought.

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  6. Willow trees
    long branches of green blowing in the air,
    fresh smell of a cut lawn,
    whispers of the wind speaking to me,
    warmth of the sun touching my skin,
    salty sweat beads on my lip,
    thankful I shoulb be for all the willow trees.

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  7. Bottom of the Ocean
    I see fish swimming around in the coral
    I smell the oxygen from my oxygen tank
    I hear the sound from my feet paddling
    I feel the cold water
    I taste my oxygen
    I think about being back on shore
    -14P-

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  8. I see the cool shimmering water
    I smell the soft salty breeze
    I hear the cawing of seagulls
    I taste the fat juicy watermelon
    I think I'm FREE!

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  9. sandy white beaches
    salty air
    crash of the waves
    salt in the ocean
    nothing could be more peaceful

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